Ah...so good! The suffocating intensity of the piece is captivating. Your imagery is so rich. I can smell the soil and tree roots, the dankness of her prison. Very enthralling poem.
Thank you so much! :) I really appreciate it!
Hopefully you don't mind, but I wanted to let you know that this piece was featured at my blog (http://i-mosaic.blogspot.com/2013/04/found-friday-napowrimo-edition.html) for a weekly feature called Found Friday, where I share the best poem of the week with my readers. Is that cool? Please do let me know if you would prefer anything changed.
Wow! Thank you, that is so kind of you!